phrasing

sietch.tex

@@ -449,20 +449,20 @@ mitigation against it, called "Sietch". Sietch is already running live in produc
 and undergoing it's first improvement from a round a feedback. This is not an academic
 paper about pipedreams, it will describe production code and networks.
 
-Beginning with a literature review of all known metadata attack methods that can be
+We begin with a literature review of all known metadata attack methods that can be
 used against Zcash Protocol blockchains. This includes their estimated attack costs
 and threat model. This paper then describes the "ITM Attack" which is a specific instance
 of a new class of metadata attacks against blockchains which the author describes
 as "Metaverse Metadata" attacks.
 
-A few other new privacy issues and metadata attacks against Zcash Protocol coins
-will be enumerated for the first time publicly in this treatise.
-
 The paper then explains Sietch in detail, which was a response to these new attacks.
 We hope this knew knowledge and theory helps cryptocoins increase their defenses
 against very well-funded adversaries including nation states and chain analysis
 companies.
 
+A few other new privacy issues and metadata attacks against Zcash Protocol coins
+will also be enumerated for the first time publicly.
+
 \begin{quote}
 In privacy zdust we trust.